Can't buy me Love **Finished**

[me]

okay, since the Special Guests is finished. This is my new story. i hope you like it. Please be honest if you don't like it...so i can make changes.


Can’t Buy me Love

It was 10.30 pm. She was walking home from the pub. She and her friend were supposed to go home together, but her friend had let her down. And for what? She thought. A guy. Her friend was having too much fun with that guy and told her to go home. She sighed and rolled her eyes as she walked on very fast. It was really dark and though there was the light of the streetlights shining down…walking alone late at night never gave her a comforting feeling.
She had the pepper spray in her purse. She knew it was forbidden to carry that with her, but she didn’t want anything bad to happen, so she carried it in case she might need it sometime.

She heard a car driving. She looked back and saw a huge limousine. It was passing by and she tried to look inside, though she knew there was nothing to be seen. The windows were black and the streetlights wouldn’t have given enough light to see the people in it. She shivered because it was cold that evening. She covered her frozen ears and remembered her friend saying she needed to put on earmuffs and she told her friend not to wear those because it would make her look stupid. She wished she had earmuffs on right now, because she couldn’t really feel her ears anymore.

Than she heard a car again. She looked back to see the same limousine which had just passed. She heard it making speed but then it kept driving next to her. She tried to look in the car again. What did it do here? It frightened here. She grabbed her purse, opened it and holds the pepper spray ready to use. Then the car drove away. She let go of her pepper spray and started running…this wasn’t funny anymore. She needed to get home as quick as possible.

[lookingthroughyou]

eeeeeek it's so GOOD already!! bahhh you must write more asap!


it's so EXCITING

[me]

But as she ran down the corner she almost bumped on to the limousine again.
“Yeesh! You fucking assholes!!!” She yelled. She gave the people in the car the finger and quickly ran away, with the pepper spray now in her hand.

I need to get home, I need to get home was all she could think off. Then she heard the car again. It was speeding and it scared her, because now it was really clear the car was following her. “Why did I have to offend them? I’m so stupid.” She thought loud.
She ran down the streets, which seemed strangely empty. She assumed the only thing that could help was shouting for help, so she did.

The car drove next to her again. The front door opened and she saw an arm grabbing for her.
“Stay away from me you freak!!!” she shouted. “Help! Somebody!”
She slapped the hand away from her, but the arm kept reaching for her. It got her coat and then he pulled her into the car.
“Nooooooooooooooo!!!!” was the only thing she could yell, before the car door closed again.

[lookingthroughyou]

oh my god. this is really freakin me out. MORE! that wasn't enough! more more more go jan go...

[me]

Enough for today......*tired*

[wrestlingdog]

I like it!

[Sgt.Honeypie]

so exiting!! I can't wait for more *squeels*

[ibrake4whales]

must have more!!!

[LongTallCecilia]

Oh c'mon write more!!!

[me]

I'm glad you seem to like it. I'll post more...soon, but not before thursday..sorry.

[wrestlingdog]

"I'll be down to the corner store with me shilling in me hand..." XD random references...

[wrestlingdog]

"I'll be down to the corner store with me shilling in me hand..." XD random references...

[me]

Okay, surprise. I do have a little more now:

She kicked and tried to bite the arms that hold her. Still screaming for help she looked at the man who was driving. She seemed to know him. He looked at her and smiled. For a second she wanted to smile back, but then she started cursing at him.
“Just relax girl. Wow…Neil, we’ve never had a wild one like this before.” the man that holds her said.
So the drivers name is Neil she thought. That name, with that face, it still didn’t ring a bell.
“What are you going to do with me?” she yelled.
The men both laughed. She stopped fighting against it, because she knew it would only make her more tired and that wasn’t helping her in case she could get out some way.
“What’s your name love?” Neil asked.
“Like I’m going to tell you. If you want my wallet…just take it!” she yelled.
The men both started laughing again.
“You stupid goats! Please tell me what you’re going to do…am I going to die?” she said looking at them. “Oh my god I’m going to die!!” she started crying.
The man who holds her tried to dry her eyes.
“Don’t cry love. We just want you to meet some people.” He said.

“Would you mind telling us your name? We guarantee you, you won’t get hurt.” He said.
“I’m Peggy.” She said.
“Okay, Peggy, listen. I’m Mal and this man next to me is Neil.” Mal said.
Peggy looked at the both of them. Mal and Neil…again she felt like she knew them. She looked outside to see where they were going. Luckily they were still in a place she knew. If she could get out, at least she would know where to run. She thought about what Mal just said. They wanted her to meet some people. Who would that be? To be honest she didn’t care. She noticed the car stopping for the traffic lights. She looked at the door, to see it wasn’t locked.
She broke out of Mal’s arms with all her might, opened the door, jumped out and ran away as hard as she could, as long as she could, till there was no car to be seen anymore.

[Ashley]

Ohhh, I like it!

I'm glad you're writing another one, because the first one was amazing.

[LongTallCecilia]

Ohhhhhhh keep writing!!!!!!!!