Blue Days, Marble Halls, Thankyou. (Completed)

[Icee]

Elise and John lied on the sand for about 4 minutes before they felt they had the strength to sit up.
The tide was coming in and the sun was going down, and it was the most beautiful thing Elise had ever experianced.

She had a feeling, a romantic feeling that was thrust upon her, she felt the sudden urge to just push John to the ground and passionately kiss him. But in the back of her mind she knew wise not to. She didn't know how he would react to such a thing.

The next thing she knows she's lying on the sand with John kissing her. Her eyes widen with realisation of the situation but she carried on.

His lips draw away from hers in a massive smile. So cute she felt the need to collapse again.

John got to his feet winking at her and grabbing her hand to lift her also. Elise potrayed a shocked look on her face just for her own enjoyment. She still actually couldn't believe he had just done what she was thinking.

'So erm.. coffee then?' John asked cheekily.
'Er..sure' She replied smiling.

[Icee]

Oh my, just reading this makes me grin.

[wrestlingdog]

eeeeheeee! lucky girl

[Mindy]

lol. Very lucky girl. ;D

[Icee]

I've got to start updating more often. I will get to Paul George and Ringo tomorrow.

[Paul'sbird]

Fab story

[Icee]

John, Ringo, George and Paul.
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The young girl started to lead them up a long spiral staircase that look awfully old.

"So ah...What's this place called?" Ringo asked politely.
"This is Fending." She replied
"Pardon?" George spoke.
"Fending, That's the castle name, but the village is Fend Town". She answered, still walking them up the long staircase.

George looked at Paul and frowned slightly.

She stopped at a large door in a corridor which they had just reached.

"Alright, this room is for you Paul". She said unlocking the door with a ginormous set of keys rattling in her hand.

"We get seperate rooms?" Paul said looking around at the others in confusion, although they just shrugged back at him.

"Would you all prefer to sleep in the one room?" She asked one brow raised.

"Well it's just ah, we are used to it." He said looking at her.
"Well it's not like.....uh." He tried to think of apropriate words.
"No it is fine, you can all stay in this room, and I will talk to you tomorrow, and supper will be brought to you shortly". She said whilst walking away.

"George". Said Paul turning to him.
"Paul" He replied.
"Punch me" He said staring him in the eyes.

George punched Paul straight in the face.

"Bloody geez" Said Paul leaning down holding his nose.
"I mean me arm." He whimpered.
"Sorry". George smiled.

Ringo fell backwards collapsing with laughter.

"Shut up Ringo!" Said Paul annoyed.

"We goin' in then" Ringo ushered Paul to open the door.
Paul stood up with great difficulty still holding his nose.

He slowly opened the door, to reveal the most magnificient room he had ever layed his eyes on.

"Oh my..." Paul whispered suddenly forgetting his throbbing nose.
"Now this is what we mean by better accomodation!"
Said George collapsing onto the huge four post bed.

[me]

Lol! I'm ashamed I haven't read this story before. it's so hilarious and you're such a good writer Sarah. The story is so funny, it cracks me up all the time I'm reading it. I admitt i'm an addict now and I can't wait to see more.

I hope paul's nose will be fine

[Icee]

"Now what are we going to do?" Said Paul shrugging at the others.

"Well, Paulie we can either get us some birds, or try 'n figure out where we are!" Said George smiling.
"I'm going for the bird plan" Said Ringo looking utterly bored.

"You reckon?" Paul asked incrediously.
"What else is there to do you twat!" Ringo spat.

"Alright lads, Come ed" Paul sighed opening up the door again.

Just as he opened the door there was Louise, standing infront of him with another two girls. And a giant bag.

"Hey Louise!" Paul spurted out.
"Where were you off to?" She said raising her brow.
"I uh....I was just going to find you!" He stammered.
"Sure you were, anyroad...Get back in there!" She said pointing at the room.

Paul, Ringo And George turned around and started walking into the room.

"I told you supper would be here shortly" She sighed.
"We're not really hungry are we guys?" Paul said looking at Gee Gee and Ritchie.
"I'm..." Ringo started but Paul cut him off.
"You're always hungry!" He looked at Ringo and frowned.

Ringo pouted closing his mouth.

"Well, suppers not coming yet, we were just set here to entertain you!" Louise said smiling.

"Say....What's in that bag?" Said George uneasily.

"You'll see" Said one of the others smiling at George.

The three girls walked to the middle of the room sat in a small circle opened the bag and pulled out three guitars.

"By George!" Paul gasped.
"What?" Said George looking at him.
"These girls play guitar!" He was shocked.

"Yes!" The girls laughed.
"You play guitars?" She asked.

"Ofcourse we do!" Paul giggled.

"Well, they are gods" said Louise shrugging at the other girls.

"Hand them here!" Paul asked stretching out his arm.

[me]

That is such a funny story lol.

[CrowDish]

-COMMENTS about how great it is!!!!!-

-so Icee will update!-

Hey, I voted you for best fanfic, so... you best be... be... -shrug- I dunno, but do something! -licks-

[Icee]

John, Elise.
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"You're asking me for coffee?" She looked at him smiling.
"Yes, theres a little shop by the foreshore, just a small cafe" He replied.

"Why must we get coffee? Honestly John, I didn't think of you to be the person to kiss a girl and offer her coffee, I thought of you to be erotic, and just.. well different I guess". She sighed.

He looked over to her in disbelief, his luscious mouth gaping wide open.

"Well, alright. You up for a ride then eh?!" He asked, winking so obviously.

"Alright!" She said, now excited.

"Let's get back fast". He said heart beating.

They started running back to the parking lot where the limousene had parked. Running along the beach, feet in the water, laughing between themselves as they got closer.

When they reached the car, John opened the door for Elise acting as the perfect gentlemen.
Elise grabbed the door from his hands, got in herself and closed it smiling.

John went around to the drivers window, asked him to wind it down, and whispered something into his ear that Elise couldnt make out.
John got in the back, and sat beside her, not bothering to look at her, instead he grabbed her hand in his own and held it close to his side.
His hands are amazinly soft...She thought to herself.

There was another stop, and John looked out the window. He smiled at the window or so it seemed, and then glanced at Else.

"Come ed!" He grabbed her hand quickly and pulled her out of the car with such force she went flying straight into him, she ended up nose to nose staring into his eyes, less than an inch away.

"Where are we?". She said looking around her.
"Peron Point!" He answered, looking slightly bewildered at the thought she'd never heard of it before.

"Okay" She replied with a bit of a frown.
"Now follow me", He said as he begin to walk out of the carpark into a patch of bushland and up a small step.
"And where does this lead to?" She asked staring up at the stone steps that led up the hill infront of her.

"Just follow will yeh?" He said shaking his head, and began to jog slowly up the steps, and she followed.

After what seemed like endless amounts of hours, they had finally reached the top, where there was a small building made out of what looked like concrete.

"Whats this?" She said feeling the wall with her hand and sticking her head inside the dark room which had no door.

"This is one of the army look outs, It's not used, Me and Paul used to hand out here, with our guitars and write tunes". He held her hand and led her inside, it was small only big enough to fit a small couch and a table.

He walked over to the otherside of the room, reaching into his pocket he pulled out a lighter and lit three candles that lit up a small percentage of the darkness, and sat himself on the couch.

"You can see everything!" She said sitting with him.
Straight infront of them, was a big gap in the wall in which you could see the pathway leading down to the ocean, and the sun set which had turned the sky orange.

"It's beautiful, it's been a big inspiration to us". He laughed.

"Well. I like it" She said turning to him grinning. He pecked her on the lips and laid his head down on her shoulder.

Suddenly he heard his phone ring in his pocket.
He got it out, and answered it.

"Allo?" He said.
"John, you should 'ere these three birds playin their guitars for os!" Paul gasped excitedly.
"Three birds? Where'd ye get three birds from you twat?" John asked confused, Elise now leaning on his shoulder.
"Well, we were playing around with the chair when you left and all that bit y'see and well, it kind of took us back to the middle age 'ere in England, and they think we're some kind of gods so ah, we got some live entertainment from these three birds, they're bloody brilliant!" He spoke fastly.

"Alright Paul, put the pot down". He laughed quietly.
"No, I'm serious. Look at your phone mate. Where does it say I'm callin' from?" Paul asked.

John took the phone away from his ear and looked at the screen.

"It's says eh...Fending?" John replied.
"Yes!" Paul said, John heard Ringo and George laughing in the background.

"Where the bloody 'ell is fending you dickhead?" John was now really confused, and quite annoyed that he was being interrupted with this nonsence.

"Its in England!" Paul insisted.

"Bye Paul". John said now pissed off, he slammed the flap of his phone shut and turned to Elise.

"What was that about?" She looked up at him, eye brows raised.

"Paul reckons he got transported to the Middle Age from your Chair, stupid bugger." He laughed leaning back onto her.

"OH shit!" She jumped off on the couch staring at John with her eyes wide open.

"What? You know where Fending is?" He giggled.
"No you friggin idiot!" She cussed at him.
"Pardon?" He said putting his head slightly forward as though waiting for her to repeat herself.

"He's telling the truth, Let's go" She said running out of the room.

John had no choice but to follow her, utterly confused and quite angry.

"Where are we going now?" He leant forward while speed walking and grabbed her arm to slow her down.

"To get them ofcourse." She shrugged him off her and began to walk again.

"You're a crazy bird." he mumbled to himself.

They'd reached the limousene once more and harshly threw themselves inside, each one not in their best of moods mind you. John was pissed off because he couldn't see why she would believe Paul. Elise was pissed off for the fact that they might have damaged her chair in some way.

When they got back to her house she pushed him through the door. Almost knocking him head first into a pillar in what seemed to be one of her many sitting rooms.

"What the bloody 'ell was that for?" He asked furious turning to her.
"You and your idiotic friends!" She started to yell at him, eyes full of rage.
"What the fuck do you mean?" He was pumping now.
"You think it's great to fucking invite them over and trash the fucking place?" She screamed louder.
Suddenly she realised she had just swore. Something awfully unlike her.

"Do yourself a favour and put in your best effort to shatter my heart of stone before it blidgeons your pretty face." It was all John could manage to get out before clenching his fists and walking out of the room towards the front door. He could hear her footsteps following.

"I will have my driver send your stuff to you, have a nice time". She closed the door so quickly he didn't have time to reply.

"Don't worry mate, she'll call you". Mr. Limo was trying to give John advice? He was so angered he couldn't think properly and punched him right in the face.

He couldnt believe what he'd just done. He stared down at his fists bewildered.

"I...I'm sorry". He stuttered offering the man a hand to pull himself up from the ground. He was holding his nose which was pouring with blood.

"Where to". The man said walking around the car to get in.

"Abbey Road studios London please". John said, still amazed at his outburst.

The man started to drive and John sat staring out the window, day dreaming.

"Why the fuck would she think he was truthful?" John kept thinking over and over.
"What would make her believe something so rediculous and obscure? Maybe it was a joke, a sick one if any". John shook his head in disgust.

He fell into a day dream, remembering running along the beach with Elise. He wouldn't forgive her for tonight.
But he wouldn't forget her either. After all, Paul was clearly pissed off John was taking her out tonight, this could have been part of his cruel bid to mess with every relationship in John's life like he'd already done, or so it seemed. Perhaps it's just drugs gone wrong, but who really knows.

He layed down across the luxorious back seat and started to nod off.

John felt a tap on his shoulder, as he slowly woke and opened his eyes, the more it hurt from the light.

"Here!" Said the Limo driver patting him and then quickly trotting away with a feared look.

John pushed himself off the seat and sat on the edge of the seat looking at the steps of the studio and the door.

"Thankgod, no apple scruffs, that would be all I need" He thought while rubbing his eyes in hope it would help them adjust.

He picked up his bags and waved the driver goodbye, although he didn't get a response.

He got into the studio, and walked straight passed the reception desk, and into the studio room where everything was where he had left it the last time he was there. Packet of smokes still on the small table covered with tabs, lyrics, pics and alchohol.

He sat on the floor of the unlit studio, reached into his shirt pocked and pulled out his glasses, of which he hardly wore, and placed them gently on his face.

[me]

Awww it was worth waiting for Sarah!!! Please add more....(slightly trying to force you here )

[Icee]

I modified it Jan

[CrowDish]

XDXD Poor John, he is SO confused. Love it!