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Post by wrestlingdog on Sept 11, 2004 17:13:34 GMT -5
Oh wow! I canna wait to see what happens!
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Post by Mindy on Sept 11, 2004 18:30:29 GMT -5
So awesome!! I can't want to read more! ;D
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Post by Cranberry Sauce on Sept 16, 2004 8:34:23 GMT -5
Oh, this is is exciting! I hope you post the next chapter soon... I want to see what's going to happen!
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Post by Icee on Sept 19, 2004 22:28:29 GMT -5
'Whoah' Said Ringo stunned. 'Er.. who are all these people?' George asked whispering to Paul. 'Why are you asking me?' Paul whispered back, the peoples eyes still firmly fixed on them. 'I thought you could 'ave planned this or somethin'?' George asked staring at him. 'No.' Paul answered looking around. 'Oh my gosh!' A young girl ran up to Paul and got on her knees. She was beautiful, shiny blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes, faultless skin. 'You got a fan!' Said George smiling. 'Fan?' The girl said looking confused at George. 'Maybe not.' George replied confused. 'My gods, you have finally joined us!' She said joyfully now standing up to showcase them to the others. 'God? Oh no you must mean John.' Paul exclaimed hopefully. Paul turned to George. 'Maybe this is kind of a fan thingy for John'. 'I doubt it.. Look at her.' George said pointing at the young girl. 'Ermm.. yes what ever you say.' She replied still smiling. As she said this the people who were gathered around and seated nelt to the floor as she had did. 'This is kind of akward...' George mumbled. 'Can you tell me where we are?' Ringo asked the girl. 'Yes my Lords, you are in England.' She replied happily. 'Yes we already know that!' Paul said now slightly annoyed. 'I don't think we are gonna get far with this one' George said to Paul. 'My Lords, please let me show you to your quarters.' She said leading them away. (Sorry it's not much  ) |
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Post by wrestlingdog on Sept 20, 2004 15:29:19 GMT -5
okkkk...
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Post by Mindy on Sept 20, 2004 16:11:30 GMT -5
...the anticipation is killing me. lol. Take your time  |
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Post by Lucy on Sept 24, 2004 17:37:48 GMT -5
I love your story so much. I get so excited every time I get to read a new chapter!
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Post by Icee on Sept 26, 2004 21:26:50 GMT -5
'Here we go' Goerge whispered to Paul.
The girl lead them off past the others who were now getting to their feet and watching them as they passed by.
'Who are you?' Paul asked.
'I'm Louise' She replied curteously.
'Oh nice name' Said Ringo nodding.
'And you three must be Paul, Ringo and George! Am I correct?' She stopped walking for a moment as though worried they weren't who she believed they were.
'How do you know that?' George asked.
'You gods are funny'. She laughed, continuing to walk.
'Gods? Whats with this god stuff?' Paul asked.
'I can't believe you finally decided to grace us with your company' She said thrilled.
'Ermm how long do you suppose we are staying here?' George asked.
'A couple of years I expect..' Louise replied hopeful.
'A couple of years?!' Paul stammered.
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John and Elise were sat at the fish and chip shop he had spotted on the way to Elises house.
'I can't believe I'm here..' Elise said looking around, hoping she wasnt noticed.
'You said you were taking me out for dinner', she added.
'I am!' John said stunned.
'This is hardly what I had in mind.' She replied poking at the fish with her fork.
'Its beatuiful here, don't you think?' He asked.
She didn't bother to reply, instead kept poking her food.
'Well, there is somewhere else you might like..' John leant forward to tell her.
'Oh well.. I'm not sure.. If it's another place like this..' She mumbled.
'No, I promise you, it will be the most marvelous thing you have ever seen..' He winked.
She wasn't bothered by him now, she realised that him taking her here was for a bit of a laugh.
'Now he should be taking me to the fancy restaurant he had planned..' she thought to herself.
But she was wrong...
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Post by Mindy on Sept 26, 2004 21:33:31 GMT -5
*giggles*
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Post by CrowDish on Sept 27, 2004 15:00:17 GMT -5
Oh Lord. In a way, I'm starting to feel bad for the poor girl. I mean, yeah she gets John but a girl like that can't handle John! XD Well nobody can really handle John but especially not her
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Post by Mindy on Sept 27, 2004 16:34:01 GMT -5
'tis true. |
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Post by Icee on Oct 21, 2004 20:25:45 GMT -5
John and Elise got back into the car and we're driving for what seemed like hours.
'Where are we going?' Elise asked on the verge of falling asleep.
'Ahh, you'll see love.' John replied.
More driving continued for atleast another twenty minutes and suddenly there was a halt.
The car had come to a sudden stop and Elise's eyes flashed open immediately, she jumped up out of her seat and shimmied (sp? ahaha) over to the window to see what was going on.
John on the other hand was still seated and laughing cheekily at Elise's reaction.
'What?' She snapped turning around to look at him.
'Nothing...' He laughed.
'Anyway.. where are we then?' She was getting more impatient by the second.
'We are at the beach' John smiled.
'Ohh, I hear they have great restaruants around here!' She said gleefully.
'Restaurants? We're not goin' to a restaraunt. You goin with me! Come ed!' He yelled grabbing hold of her wrist and pulling her away from the car.
Both of them running along the sand.
When they were as far away from the car as possible they both collapsed in the sand in need of a breath.
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Post by CrowDish on Oct 21, 2004 20:30:37 GMT -5
Awww... how romantic XD
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Post by Mindy on Oct 23, 2004 21:56:11 GMT -5
Aww, that's adorable.
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Post by Lucy on Oct 29, 2004 20:33:13 GMT -5
so cute.  |
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