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Post by nothingisreal2 on Jan 21, 2005 21:40:15 GMT -5
I'm loving it too, keep writing...I love the bathroom window part.  |
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Jan 21, 2005 22:22:59 GMT -5
don't worry, I'm even gonna make a play on "michelle".
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Jan 25, 2005 13:46:32 GMT -5
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Michelle stared at him. she didn't know what to say. "How can you not know led zeppelin? they were like, the best band ever!" she practically shouted. The boys exchanged glances, and ringo gestured to paul to follow him, leaving the room. George shrugged at john and left to go get a drink from the mini-bar. John looked around him, expecting to see soeone else to deal with this problem, and seeing no one, sighed heavily and sat down next to her. "So, where are you from agen?" "America," She said, "And I don't now how or why I'm here. just get me home, please!" She put her head in her hands. How did she get here? John rolled his eyes and left the room. Michelle lay down, wondering what to do.
"I DON'T CARE, JUST GET 'ER OUT OF 'ERE!" came a shout from the next room where ringo and paul had gone. Michelle burst into tears, thoroughly stressed out. She ran past george and john into the bathroom and locked the door.
a half an hour later, she had stopped crying and devised a plan. this must be some sort of trick, to fool her into doing something, that her mom had made up. she's just demand to see a calendar or something, and they would have to back down. She decided bnot to leave just yet, because they would probably come get her when they wanted to. she sat down on the bathroom floor and began to sing. When she was little, herdad had always sung it to her, to calm her down, and it had always worked. He always said her name came from it. "Michelle, ma belle, these are words that go together well, my michelle.." she sang, quietly. A soft knock came at her door. she swung around and whispered, "Who is it?"
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hope all of y'all's like it so far. will write more later.
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Jan 25, 2005 21:11:51 GMT -5
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Paul's voice came from behind the door. "Will yeh open the door?" he said. she went up to it and unlocked it, opening it the slightest bit. she stared through the crack into paul's big brown eye. "What was that..tune you were singin', just now? it was...very pretty." he said, embarrased. she laughed, then quickly covered her mouth. It was too ironic. "Umm..it's a song by..uh...the beatles..I mean you guys. My dad used to sing it to me when I was little. it always calmed me down." She giggled out loud at the shocked look on his face. "'ow d'you know...that?" he stuttered. " I'm from 2005, I TOLD you!" He shook his head and walked away, then abruptly turned back towards her. "That explains a lot..but...why...are you here?" He pleaded with her. She muttered "I don't...know.." He stared into her green eyes with his brown. "I'd better tell the boys 'bout this.." He said, more to himself than her. She slumped down on the ground, exhausted with this ordeal. Paul backed away slowly, almost as if she might jump up and attack him.
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that's all for now. sorry if it sucks, not my fault. this is a hard bit in the story.
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Post by Sgt.Honeypie on Jan 25, 2005 21:47:16 GMT -5
It doesn't suck! I love it  |
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Post by LongTallCecilia on Jan 25, 2005 22:00:23 GMT -5
I love it too!! ;D
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Jan 25, 2005 22:47:36 GMT -5
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Michelle was still sitting on the ground when john bounded over and plopped himself next to her. "So, paulie's trying to tell me 'bout these funny time travel things, but I still thing you came in through the bathroom, or somthin'. so, I think I'll get onme from the crowd too, eh? And YOU'RE going to help me." before she could utter any words, he grabbed her hand and pulled her over to the window. "So, what d'you think? That one? or that one?" he said, pointing at random girls in the crowd and grinning at the squealing that ensued. Shocked at the power he held, she muttered, "That one," pointing to the first girl she saw. She was pretty tall, with red hair and glasses looking slightly out of place. He grinned and pushed her towards the door. "Go get 'er." He rubbed his hands together, chuckling. Michelle stumbled down the stairs of the apartment building, feeling pretty lost. It was crayz that john was asking her to do this, but her situation right then was prety crazy, so what did she have to lose? she walked out the door of the apartment building and immediately was ravaged by girls her own age. "did you see my george?" "was paul there? did you talk to him?" they grabbed at her clothes as she struggledtowards the girl she had pointed out. when she reached her, she grabbed her hand and muttered, "Come with me,". The girl, looking even more disoriented than before, followed her up to the apartment door where she quickly flashed the doorman with the pass she had. they burst into the lobby with screams trailing after them. "Why am I here?" asked the girl, adjusting her glasses. "Long story, not enough time. I'll explain when we get up there. First, what's your name, and your favourite beatle?" The girl looked at her oddly and said, "My name's aurora. And my favourite beatle is john...he's so-" she cut herself off quickly and said, "Why? am I- Am I-" Michelle grimly looked at her. "You're meeting him alright. But it's not going to be a fun ride. They aren't that nice, you know." She said, beginning to walk up the stairs. Aurora, wide-eyed, nodded, and followed her.
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whee! it gets...better or worse, you decide!
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Post by CrowDish on Jan 25, 2005 23:02:37 GMT -5
XDXD Amazing. "They aren't that nice, you know." That's great. You've mastered comic-relief cheeky John, too!
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Post by me on Jan 26, 2005 3:36:28 GMT -5
I love it Olivia!!
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Jan 26, 2005 9:52:58 GMT -5
lol thanks you guys!  "Aurora" is the comic relief right now. her and john. heh heh. |
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Post by me on Jan 26, 2005 9:54:04 GMT -5
heh heh
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Post by CrowDish on Jan 26, 2005 11:56:55 GMT -5
Oh God, if you make her into a cheeky bastard too, it would be hysterical. I'm not sure how John would react to that. I could see him being disoriented by it at first but then he'd get used to it and the two of them would turn into a MONSTER XDXDXD
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Jan 26, 2005 12:22:09 GMT -5
A monster...not 2?
haha I can see it now....
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Post by CrowDish on Jan 26, 2005 12:40:35 GMT -5
No, they would be like this one, two headed monster of cheek
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Jan 27, 2005 15:43:13 GMT -5
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michelle got to the door, tinking of what might happen with aurora and john. She seemed like the dreamy type, he's probably just use and abuse her. It was so terrible what they could do, how much power they had. "So, are we there yet?" asked aurora eagerly. Michelle, startled, looked up. "No, don't get yoúr knickers in a twist, we're almost there." "They're in a twist already! I'm meeting john lennon!" she cried gleefully. Micheel rolled her eyes and knocked on the door they had come to. john burst open the door smiling wickedly. "Hallo, girls, come in. Pauly's jus' makin' us some tea." michelle turned around to see aurora's reaction to the beatle, and was amazed. Instead of fainting or squealing like most girls would do, she was grinning just as wickedly as John had been. Michelle shrugged and walked through the apartment door.
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woop.
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"Aurora" is the comic relief right now. her and john. heh heh.