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Post by Paul'sbird on Apr 16, 2005 11:00:58 GMT -5
 Where'd you get the idea for the shower? this is great
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Post by ibrake4whales on Apr 16, 2005 11:58:35 GMT -5
i am COMPLETELY jealous!!! are you gonna post more today?
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Post by lookingthroughyou on Apr 16, 2005 21:36:11 GMT -5
eeeeeeeee ringo....
eeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Post by Icee on Apr 26, 2005 21:49:26 GMT -5
Ringo leant against the wall gently, and slowly closed his eyelids.
A sudden flash of pain ran through his head, and he fell to the floor.
He grabbed hold of his head, searing pain, he couldn't think.
Tears streamed down his cheeks, he couldn't scream for help. His head felt as though it would implode at any second.
John came back into the room to find Ringo squirming around on the floor, holding his head so tighly it looked like he was going to pull it off.
"Shit" John yelled as he ran over to him quickly picking him up.
Ringo started screaming at the top of his lungs.
John tried to calm him.
"Rings...Rings what's up? What's goin on...?" John shreiked, frustrated he wasn't getting anywhere.
Ringo had flashes in his mind, of what he was not sure. All he knew, was that he felt as though he was slowly dieing.
"SOMEONE GET IN HERE!" John yelled turning around.
George ran in, in a towel.
"What's goin' on?" George asked, looking down at Ringo in shock.
"I don't know! He wont talk to me" John snapped at George.
"Ringo, Ringo calm down!" George stroked Ringo's face gently.
"Call an ambulance" John yelled...
THE END.
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Post by ibrake4whales on Apr 26, 2005 22:32:47 GMT -5
the end? you mean the end, the end?! is there going to be a part 3? i need to know if ringo wil be ok!
but otherwise this is/was a kick ass story!!!
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Post by me on Apr 27, 2005 8:43:01 GMT -5
wow, this is an end I would have never expected. Great story. Was much fun.
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Where'd you get the idea for the shower? this is great
