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Post by Paul'sbird on Mar 19, 2005 1:05:05 GMT -5
I love it, keep going!!
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Post by dude41 on Mar 19, 2005 2:31:03 GMT -5
i'll keep goin once u keep writin more but for now im going to sleep *snore*
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Post by dude41 on Mar 20, 2005 23:27:08 GMT -5
"Wow." I said after the boys explined themselves. "Thats weird." The biggest difference was that they still were a band and we sorta wasn't. I still sat in silence until Paul asked" If you don't mind, luv, could we hear one of your songs?" "Sure but I sorta need me guitar." "O I see. Are you right handed or left handed?" Paul asked, the others were listening but still playing their game of poker(George was wininng big time with this huge idiotic smile on his face). "Right and this song has to be don on an acoutic, cos I don't know how it would sound otherewise."Next Paul said, "'Ey, John luv, would it be all right if Brit used your acustic?" "Sure its over there." Paul got up and took it out of its case and handed it to me. We moved over to the couch away from the otheres. I tuned it up, and explained to Paul the name of the song and how me and Jen wrote it. We came home on our last night in England and we were the designated(sp?) drivers(even though we had a couple drinks and joints, but not as bad as the others). We decided to go down to our favorite spot, Strawberry Feilds. As we said it was the place that kept us sane. So we went in the back corner and I took out my guitar, strumming a tune that I had floating around in my head for a while. We laughed and cried at the stories we told each other about here. About after about five hours of so, she asked me what that tune was. I told her it was a tune floating 'round in my head waiting for lyrics. We sat there for an hou making up lyrics and when we were don we named it "Love For You" because it was about the people and places we were going to remember once we left England. It was both our favorie because it was our first Leslie/Edwards composition, as we called it. I finally stated playin the song to Paul and laughed at his face when I was done. "What?Was it really that bad?" I asked. He shook his head, and before he answered he turned to look at the lads who were also in awe. "Brittney, that was the most beutiful thing I've ever heard. Shit." "Wo, thanks." was all I got to say, before Eppy led the boys away to play and the friendly giant Mal and extremly nice Neil(or Nell as they all called him) led me to where we were going to stand and watch the Beatles...
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Post by ibrake4whales on Mar 20, 2005 23:29:24 GMT -5
i dont care about typos!!!! coz your story is so good!!!!
you must post more!!!! i like it alot!!!!!!
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Post by dude41 on Mar 20, 2005 23:31:22 GMT -5
thankz i'll post more a litle later tonight( as long as I don't get caught by my mom) cuz my fingers HURT!!!
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Post by ibrake4whales on Mar 21, 2005 17:22:05 GMT -5
teehee i cant wait! ;D
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Post by dude41 on Mar 22, 2005 18:56:06 GMT -5
After the first five minutes, I got a huge headache from all the screaming girls. Mal and Neil stayed by me the whole time, which I was greatful for. But if you take away the massive headache, the girls, and barely being able to hear the boys, it was a great concert. I mean I was seeing the Beatles live for God sakes! I soon felt a pang of guilt wash over me as I realised that my friends had no idea of where I was. Oh well I thought They'll live. And I might be able to introduce them to the guys if I was lucky. I watch in excitement as the boys play there songs. I loved the syncronised(sp?) bows. Me and Dani always joked about that, and we all would do it when we would play. Half-way during the last song( I Want To Hold Your Hand) Nell and Mal brought me back-stage again. I heard semi heard Paul announce a thanks, as a uproar of screams erupted. The boys got back stage and they each got a towel to wipe of their sweaty faces. Since I was sitting on the couch chatting to Cynthia, Ringo came and sat by me putting his arm around my shoulders. "So, luv, how were we?" "Fine Ringo just fine!" George sat on the other side of me and did the same( putting his arm around my shoulders) John took Cyn on his lap, and since there was no more room on the couch, Paul sat on the floor. "Awe wittle Paulie-Waulie 'as no where to sit." John said with a look of mock sadness on his face. Paul only rolled his eyes and said "Shut-up, Lennon." I got up and said "You know, Paul you could have my seat." Before Paul could reply, George said "Ohhh Paul, she wants YOU to have HER seat!" Then George said to me, "You shouldn't say thay around Paul here, or he'll take it as a free chance to take you to bed!" Paul kicked George and said, "Oh no luv I'm fine right where I am." I go back to sit down, only to find Ringo spread out where I was supposed to sit, fast asleep. "Great. Now where do I sit?" I mumbled to myself. Both at the same time George and Paul said. "Well, you could sit on my lap." except Paul said it shyly, while as George said it with great entusiasm. John, George Ringo (who just woke up, but still won't move), Paul, Mal, Neil, and Brian look on, waiting for my answer, as if I was deciding who I was going to marry instead of whose lap I was going to sit on...
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Post by ibrake4whales on Mar 22, 2005 19:11:47 GMT -5
its so cute!!! you MUST post more! today!!
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Post by dude41 on Mar 22, 2005 21:07:00 GMT -5
"Ummm..." I say, even though I know who I want to sit by, but the thing that was puzzling me was if George was interested in me too. It couldn't be, could it? AHHHHHHHH!!! Crud now what do I want to do. I couldn't hurt both of theri feelings, cuz they were both my favorites, but who? Finally, Brian said it was time to go. PHEW! We all snuck out, holding hands like before. The thing I remember most about the car ride is that even though I was already next to Paul, George snuck his way by my other side. Damn!, was I ever confused. We drove back to their hotel(remember my stuff is still there), talking about the concert. Before we step out, Brian decides to tel;l the boys his secret(not that he was gay, but...) "Well" he said, "Nobody is going to know this but I have rescheudeuled ya'lls concerts and made plans for ya'll to have two weeks off over here in New York, and are free to do what ever ya'll want whenever ya'll want with who ever you want, as long as they are up to it", he adds as an after thought. John, Paul, George, and Ringo all look at me suspiciosly...
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Post by ibrake4whales on Mar 22, 2005 21:24:52 GMT -5
ooohhh!!! post more post more!!!!
*begs*
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Post by dude41 on Mar 22, 2005 22:45:29 GMT -5
:'(Hey you guys i don't know if i'll updat again cuz i feel like everyone hates me and i feel like shit soo... maybe a bit later after i go back to more crying...  *crys* |
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Post by ibrake4whales on Mar 23, 2005 21:02:38 GMT -5
DONT CRY!!!!!!!!!!! yknow i heard when your sad, just write a story isnt that how the old saying goes....  |
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Post by dude41 on Mar 23, 2005 23:42:16 GMT -5
nice one! i'm better now, just had a HUGE emotional breakdown soo.... ill update later!(this also has to do with a small case of writers block AHH!!!)
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Post by ibrake4whales on Mar 24, 2005 19:38:35 GMT -5
its ok!!!!!
i hope youll get over the block soon!
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Post by dude41 on Mar 24, 2005 22:45:04 GMT -5
ummm ???ummm  does any body have any ideas cos im completly lost!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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