Fan fic: "The special guests"

[me]

George was slightly nervous. Now they were all alone. Since their arrival in this hotel yesterday he’d been feeling a little strange and shaky. And he now knew Jantina was the reason. He really liked her. She was cute and funny. Okay at first she didn’t even notice him, because Paul got her attention, but now that he was out of the way and he could take his chance.
“So,” George asked. “How are you feeling about working for us eh?” he grinned.
“Well, we’re not really working for you. We’re working for our boss. But I know what you mean. It’s fun though, you’re a bunch of crazy coconuts.” Jantina said.
Crazy coconuts. George had never heard someone say that and in such a cute way.
“Jantina? May I ask you something?” George said. Now he felt his legs shaking, trying to get control of them.
“Sure” she said.
“Err… I was thinking…maybe you would like to go…” George said but got interrupted by a loud bang of a slamming door.
Lauren walked through the room yelling and cursing with Paul following her. They were having a fight that was obvious. Lauren walked out and left Paul. He sat down on the couch.
“Awww, that’s so sad.” Jantina said. “Have you got a minute?” she asked George and walked over to Paul.
George was feeling really disappointed. He was almost there. He almost asked it…why did Paul have to come in again. George left to his bedroom and locked the door.

[me]

Jantina sat down to Paul who was turning his head away from her.
“The least you can do is look at me, Paul.” Jantina said.
He turned his face to her.
“So, what’s all this?” Jantina asked.
Paul rolled his eyes. “Lauren and I are having a fight okay?” he said.
“That’s sad.” Jantina didn’t really know what to say. “Is it going to be okay?”
“I don’t know okay! If you really want to know, it was about you, the fight was about YOU!” Paul yelled and he got up. “ Why the hell did I have to meet you again?” he said.
Jantina was shocked by what he was saying now and all she could do is listen. She wasn’t able to speak anymore. Paul was standing in front of her pointing and yelling.
“We used to be friends, we USED to be. My life was all good. I had never really forgotten you, but life goes on. I know it did for you too. Lauren might not seem to be the nicest girl in town, but I really love her. Seeing you again has made me weak. It really did Ten!!!”
Ten? He remembered. She couldn’t believe he remembered what he would call her when they were young. When they first met and introduced themselves to each other and she said her name. Jantina was really hard to say in the right way in English. That’s why most people here called her Jan. But Paul called her Ten, since she’d told him most of her friends in the Netherlands called her “Tientje” which is Ten in English. It sounded stupid now hearing him say that, but it was also cute.
“I-I really didn’t mean to come in between you and Lauren. I mean, I didn’t even know it was you coming here.” She said.
“I know I know.” Paul said as he calmed down a little.
“You’re really beautiful Ten. And of course I’m glad to see you again. But I really don’t wanna break up with Lauren. I love her.” He sat down next to her again.
“I know you do” Jantina said. “Geez, Paul, I really didn’t expect all of this to happen.”
“Me neither” Paul said as he put his head on her shoulder.
That moment the door opened and Sarah, John and Ringo walked in.
“This is really confusing me.” John said. “I thought you said George was about to ask her on a date?” he said to Sarah.
“George was about to..what!!?” both Paul and Jantina said shocked.

[me]

Jantina got up looking at Sarah. So that’s what he was about to ask she was thinking. And then I just left him sitting there, because I went to here to see Paul.
“Oh my God” she said. “What have I done?”
“What doe you mean Ten?” Paul asked.
“Ten!?” the others said.
“I’ll explain that later” Jantina said waving it all away with her hand. “Paul. You go after Lauren. I’m gonna go check if George still wants to speak to me.”
“But, George?” Paul asked like he was saying it was impossible for Jantina to like George.
“Just let her, Paulie.” Ringo said. “She’s right. You’d better go after Lauren again. Go!” He opened the door for Paul who walked through it confused.

Jantina got to George’s bedroom. She tried to open the door, but noticed it was locked, so she knocked on the door.
“George! Would you please open the door?” she asked.
“No!” George shouted back.
Jantina felt disappointed. This was all her own fault. She asked Sarah to hear George out about her. Sarah did and if she did understand right he was just about to ask her out and she left him there when she went to Paul. She messed up. She didn’t want to hurt both of them.
“George, please. I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you.” She said wiping a tear from her face.
“No! Just go away.” He said.
Jantina now burst into tears.
“George, please open the door would you?” she now really wanted to get in.
Nothing happened. She let herself falling down on the floor and sat against the door. It was all her own fault. Then Ringo came sitting next to her.
“Feeling kind of shitty, right now eh?” he said as he gave her a tissue to wipe the tears out of her face. “George will come around again. It may take a while, but he will. I guess he’s just really hurt now. He was like the only guy who didn’t have company and then there was you. You really made him weak and that in only two days.” He said smiling at her.
Jantina wiped away the tears and said, “I feel so stupid. I really like him, Ringo. I really do.”
“He knows that, luv. Don’t worry” Ringo said.
Then suddenly they both felt backwards because George had opened the door.
They both looked at him upside down.
“Hi there.” George said. “Jantina…would you like to come in?”
“Of-of course” she said as she got up. She thanked Ringo with a smile and got in the room.

[Icee]

Oh my god Jan, this rocks so much!

[me]

Thank you girl! I don't know what to say.

[me]

She walked in and just stood there. She really didn’t know what to do. She definitely didn’t want to hurt him again.
“You can sit down if you want to.” George said to her.
“Thank you.” She said as she sat down on the bed. It was a really beautiful bedroom. She had never known the Presidential Suite had such a beautiful bedrooms.
“Okay,” George said as he sat down next to her. “I’ve heard everything you and Ringo said. I’m glad you didn’t want to hurt me.”
“Of course not, I w….” Jantina tried to speak but George put his finger on her lips saying: “Ssh, please let me finish.” George said. “I really like you Jan. But I want you to be honest with me. Are you in love with Paul?” George pulled away his finger and just sat there looking at her with wondering eyes.
“Paul?” Jantina said. Of course she still had feelings for him and Paul just said seeing her again made him weak as well, but he also didn’t want to break up with Lauren. And besides, she had felt so good when she saw George this last two days. Being here with him was heaven. “No, I’m not in love with Paul. He’s just my friend.” She said as she looked into George’s eyes.
“Okay.” George said as he moved a little closer to her.
“Now I’m gonna ask you what I wanted to ask you earlier today. Would you please let me finish now?” He said looking at her.
“Of course” she said smiling.
“Okay, Jan. Since I’ve seen you for the first time yesterday my mind is going crazy. When we did the radio shows this morning, the only thing I could think of was you. I really would like to get to know you better, so…” he paused for a minute “would you go on a date with me?”
Jantina felt so happy. “Of course. I would love to.” She said and smiled.
George got her hand in puts in his. “May err…May I kiss you as well?” George asked kind of nervous.
“Yes.” Was the only thing Jantina could say. She was also nervous, but also happy this was happening.
George moved his head towards her bending it a little, then gently put his lips on hers. They both closed their eyes.

[Icee]

That's really really cute!

[me]

I know ;D

[lookingthroughyou]

awww ths rocks!! keep going, it's amazing. I <3 everything in it.

[nothingisreal2]

I love it, but the green-eyed monster of jealousy is about to come out.




XD

[Ashley]

So cute! But I want George

[Paul'sbird]

I love it! But I hate myself

[lookingthroughyou]

Aw. poor lauren. <3 your other story is good!! lol you're the good guy in the other one. -hug-

I want george tooo!!! heehee..

it's so good.

[ibrake4whales]

so cute!!!! i love it!! aww i want george!!!

[me]

Okay just to clear this up for once and for all: Lauren isn't a bitch in real life...just in my story. Which is just to make it a little bit more fun! We've talked about that . Just keep reading it and you'll see what happens to her.